tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5062050519129929202.post2289340842989482485..comments2023-10-26T05:50:53.227-04:00Comments on See the Stars: First Chapter of Your Novel Part 4: GroundingKrystalyn Drownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12895353579071997640noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5062050519129929202.post-3811107167978302312010-04-12T22:56:21.567-04:002010-04-12T22:56:21.567-04:00Very interesting story premise.
Thanks for findi...Very interesting story premise. <br /><br />Thanks for finding me in the blogosphere. What a treat to follow it back to your bloggy world. :o)<br /><br />~LolaLola Sharphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14394765053485642935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5062050519129929202.post-5348042792052786762010-04-12T18:42:27.085-04:002010-04-12T18:42:27.085-04:00wowww... i loved this!! i prefer version #1 -- bec...wowww... i loved this!! i prefer version #1 -- because it's cleaner and shows more without telling as much.<br /><br />but very cool concept! great writing!!Taherehhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03111022596822176769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5062050519129929202.post-84574257944645040852010-04-12T14:53:11.551-04:002010-04-12T14:53:11.551-04:00That is a great premise! The last 2 paragraphs are...That is a great premise! The last 2 paragraphs are what hooked me too. And I see what you mean, version 2 I think is the stronger opening. I know I'm just agreeing with the first comment but it's true :)Crystal Cookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06665844725894074136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5062050519129929202.post-19842110474715552312010-04-12T12:13:42.903-04:002010-04-12T12:13:42.903-04:00Version 2 is my choice, although the last 2 paragr...Version 2 is my choice, although the last 2 paragraphs are what hooked me. Great Premise.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14556806194192653074noreply@blogger.com